Comments on: Photo Story: Heaven http://colin.rantx.com/viz/2009/07/09/photo-story-heaven/ Colin's Blog for NM2208 Wed, 28 Jul 2010 11:53:20 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8 hourly 1 By: colination http://colin.rantx.com/viz/2009/07/09/photo-story-heaven/comment-page-1/#comment-18 colination Mon, 20 Jul 2009 04:00:21 +0000 http://colin.rantx.com/viz/?p=61#comment-18 thanks for the comments. we have decided to redo our photo story soon. thanks for the comments. we have decided to redo our photo story soon.

]]> By: Alfred http://colin.rantx.com/viz/2009/07/09/photo-story-heaven/comment-page-1/#comment-15 Alfred Sun, 19 Jul 2009 15:29:57 +0000 http://colin.rantx.com/viz/?p=61#comment-15 Yes...transition to photo 8 is to too abrupt. You could save frames but having the roof door open and showing the outside of the roof? Yes…transition to photo 8 is to too abrupt. You could save frames but having the roof door open and showing the outside of the roof?

]]> By: Zhixiong http://colin.rantx.com/viz/2009/07/09/photo-story-heaven/comment-page-1/#comment-8 Zhixiong Sun, 12 Jul 2009 16:01:54 +0000 http://colin.rantx.com/viz/?p=61#comment-8 I've told Meng Hui about Photo #8. It seems too abrupt by introducing 2 new characters into a concluding photo. Were they trying to save the guy? Were they meeting the guy for a drink? The transition from Photo #7 to #8 shows that the "suicidal" guy has been waiting for a few hours. Is this time lapse effect something you wanted to achieve? Photo #3, you can consider cropping off the keyhole and focus more on the highest floor number pad. Regards, Zhixiong DW2 Tutor I’ve told Meng Hui about Photo #8. It seems too abrupt by introducing 2 new characters into a concluding photo. Were they trying to save the guy? Were they meeting the guy for a drink?

The transition from Photo #7 to #8 shows that the “suicidal” guy has been waiting for a few hours. Is this time lapse effect something you wanted to achieve?

Photo #3, you can consider cropping off the keyhole and focus more on the highest floor number pad.

Regards,
Zhixiong
DW2 Tutor

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