visual rants for NM2208 » Assignment 3 http://colin.rantx.com/viz Colin's Blog for NM2208 Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:42:02 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8 en hourly 1 Picture Story Final http://colin.rantx.com/viz/2009/07/29/picture-story-final/ http://colin.rantx.com/viz/2009/07/29/picture-story-final/#comments Tue, 28 Jul 2009 17:11:45 +0000 colination http://colin.rantx.com/viz/?p=148 We realised that in the previous work, there were some continuity errors in picture 1 and 2. Also, the picture 3 with the watch could be better with a facial expression of the person feeling frustrated/late.

With that in mind, Meng Hui and I went to re-take some of our shots. Picture 1 now shows the full body of the person, creating an establishing shot. Picture 3 now includes a facial expression. Motion blur was also added to the person and the bus in most of the pictures to create the effect of moving away. Lastly, Picture 8 was re-taken to increase the size and contrast of the text on the iPhone.

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]]> http://colin.rantx.com/viz/2009/07/29/picture-story-final/feed/ 0 Picture Story Revisited: Draft http://colin.rantx.com/viz/2009/07/24/picture-story-revisited-draft/ http://colin.rantx.com/viz/2009/07/24/picture-story-revisited-draft/#comments Thu, 23 Jul 2009 17:44:24 +0000 colination http://colin.rantx.com/viz/?p=109 We took our photos based on the new storyboard and this is what we got. After putting the photos together, I realised that there is not enough facial expressions and there is a continuity error in photo no. 1, 2, 3 as firstly, the bus is a different bus, and secondly, the ground beneath the watch looks like the person has walked back to the position in 1. I think we will retake photos 1, 2 and 3 as feedback from the tutors is that photo 3 can be better if there is a facial expression of the person feeling late. Also, photo 8 needs to be clear enough when printed. We possibly have to try and/or retake it also. Need to add motion blurs to the running scenes too. But I guess this story is better than the first one.

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]]> http://colin.rantx.com/viz/2009/07/24/picture-story-revisited-draft/feed/ 1 Picture Story Revisited: Sketch http://colin.rantx.com/viz/2009/07/24/picture-story-revisited-sketch/ http://colin.rantx.com/viz/2009/07/24/picture-story-revisited-sketch/#comments Thu, 23 Jul 2009 17:40:54 +0000 colination http://colin.rantx.com/viz/?p=106 Meng Hui and I decided to redo our picture story since feedback was that suicide stories are quite cliche. So we decided to do a story based in NUS. Here’s a sketch of the storyboard:

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The story is starts with a person sending a message to his friends, “See u all in heaven”. The audience is brought through a series of steps in which the person gets to ‘heaven’. In the end, ‘heaven’ stands for something else…

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