Photo Story: Heaven

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The story is starts with a person sending a message to his friends, “See u all in heaven”. The audience is brought through a series of steps in which the person gets to ‘heaven’. In the end, ‘heaven’ stands for something else…

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  1. Zhixiong Jul 13th 2009

    I’ve told Meng Hui about Photo #8. It seems too abrupt by introducing 2 new characters into a concluding photo. Were they trying to save the guy? Were they meeting the guy for a drink?

    The transition from Photo #7 to #8 shows that the “suicidal” guy has been waiting for a few hours. Is this time lapse effect something you wanted to achieve?

    Photo #3, you can consider cropping off the keyhole and focus more on the highest floor number pad.

    Regards,
    Zhixiong
    DW2 Tutor

  2. Alfred Jul 19th 2009

    Yes…transition to photo 8 is to too abrupt. You could save frames but having the roof door open and showing the outside of the roof?

  3. colination Jul 20th 2009

    thanks for the comments. we have decided to redo our photo story soon.


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