Picture Story Revisited: Draft

in [ Assignment 3 ]

We took our photos based on the new storyboard and this is what we got. After putting the photos together, I realised that there is not enough facial expressions and there is a continuity error in photo no. 1, 2, 3 as firstly, the bus is a different bus, and secondly, the ground beneath the watch looks like the person has walked back to the position in 1. I think we will retake photos 1, 2 and 3 as feedback from the tutors is that photo 3 can be better if there is a facial expression of the person feeling late. Also, photo 8 needs to be clear enough when printed. We possibly have to try and/or retake it also. Need to add motion blurs to the running scenes too. But I guess this story is better than the first one.